Wanna make some air hostesses friends in wuhan

ranjanmmp

Hi, I am a foreign medical student in wuhan. I have been living in China for few years ( I love the life in China)
and presently I am studying in an accredited medical university in Wuhan. I would like to get some airhostess friends for friendship.
I like smart ,and intelligent girls.I have got many hobbies like travelling,reading,movies,music and etc. If u are interested ,don't hesitate to write to me in QQ. My QQ number is 693852961.
Thanks for taking your time to read my notice.
Bye
PS: I can speak chinese  fluently  ,so if u think your english is poor then don't worry

ranjanmmp

顶。。顶。。！

ranjanmmp

我是在武汉的一位留学生。在中国已经待了几年，我最近才发现这个网站
想认识在武汉的空姐做朋友。。。。。如果有兴趣的话联系我， qq 693852961 shi wo de QQ

ranjanmmp

顶。。。顶。。

ranjanmmp

男生不要加我

ranjanmmp

谢谢发给我信息的空姐朋友，我以后有空就回复你们。。

飞天小石榴

   好可爱····pp~~~

月下天山

“ I can speak chinese  fluently...”
Really？？？
I can not believe you...

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ranjanmmp 发表于 2010-12-15 01:00
Hi, I am a foreign medical student in wuhan. I have been living in China for few years ( I love the  ...

楼主的英语不咋地，有几个浅显的错误。列举如下：

I have been living in China for few years. 应改为 I have been living in China for a few years.
few 表示否定的意思，用于否定句和疑问句，a few 才表示肯定的意思。

I would like to get some airhostess friends for friendship. 应改为：I would like to make some airhostess friends for friendship.
滥用 get 这个万金油动词，不做改动也是可以的，只是表达不够地道。


I have got many hobbies like travelling,reading,movies,music and etc. 应该为：
I have many hobbies, such as travelling, reading, movies, music, etc.

再次滥用 get 这个动词，hobbies 是无法 get 的，只能 have 或 form ，同时对 like 和 etc. 的用法不甚了了。